Graghesh again

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+# Country, Grag'hesh
 ## Facts
 **Population**: 130,000
 
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 **Government**: Rule by military hierarchy.
 
 **Bordering nations (clockwise)**: [Magic Sea](magic_sea.md), [Nathnan](nathnan.md), [The Wastes](wastes.md), TBD 
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+## About
+Grag'hesh is the orcish homeland--all orcs on the continent come from there. It is in a state of perpetual war with one or more of its neighbors. It's essentially incapable of surviving on its own--raids and wars with neighbors are the only way the orcs can eat, either by directly stealing food, or more often pillaging and buying food. Orcish society respects soldier, raiders, and the strong.

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     - [Canyonport](canyonport.md)
 - [Eldwood](eldwood.md)
 - [Four Spires](four_spires.md)
-- [Grag'hesh](graghesh)
+- [Grag'hesh](graghesh.md)
 - [Lorille](lorille.md)
 - [Magic Sea](magic_sea.md)
 - [Maris](maris.md)

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 **Bordering nations (clockwise)**: [The Wastes](wastes.md), [Lorille](lorille.md), [Xuxuwell](xuxuwell.md), TBD
 
 ## About
-The Senly Faye is home to the a tribe of halfings, who ride standing on the back of horses; tieflings in the colder east, who care for enormous herds of buffalo; and smaller groups of goat-herding humans. All three are nomadic.
+The Senly Faye is home to the a tribe of halfings, who ride standing on the back of horses and buffalo; tieflings in the colder east, who care for enormous herds of yaks; and smaller groups of goat-herding humans. All three are nomadic.
 
 ## Government
 The Senly Feye is a broad cross-tribal affiliation. The various tribes of the grasslands and tundra banded together for political purposes to deal with their neighbors, but operate independently. Actual formal government is done about once a year, in a large plain the nation has designated its "capitol". Most of the year it is kept empty, with only 4 foreign embassies.